Music Video Feedback

My teacher looked at our first draft of our music video. She said that she was very impressed with the different types of shots that we had and the attention to framing. However there are a couple things we need to work on for example the quality of shots, editing and our story line. To improve our quality of some of the images we are going to use a different camera and different lighting to make it look more professional. To improve our editing we are going to use more transitions to make the video flow easier, as well as using effects to show our skills. And lastly, to improve our story line we are going to do a focus group of our target audience to see what they think about our music video and what we could improve to make it make more sense.